Tuesday, October 29, 2024

Headed to Another World

With Halloween just around the corner, this is a good time to talk to a fantasy author. My guest today is author S. J. Carson, who has a new book out that sounds perfect for the season.

S.J. is an author and poet based in Las Vegas, Nevada. She holds degrees from Stanford and Boston Universities. A two-time Pushcart Prize nominee, her poems have appeared in both online and print journals. 
Aveline is her first novel. Let's find out more about S.J. and her new book.

S.J., what do you enjoy about being an author?


My favorite part of being an author is that I get to live a second life through my writing. I love that I can escape my ordinary existence at any time by disappearing into a fantasy world that I created.


What advice do you have for beginning writers?


First, write what excites you, not necessarily what you think will be popular or what other people tell you that you should write. When you’re first starting out, write to please the most important audience you’ll ever have—yourself. 


Second, be patient with yourself as you develop your craft; mastery doesn’t come overnight. Learn to be tolerant of failure and uncertainty. Not all your ideas will work out, but that doesn’t mean you should give up on your writing dreams.


Third, don’t compare yourself too much to other writers. While it’s okay to have high literary ambitions, of course, it’s not productive to beat yourself up over someone else’s success. In the wise words of Mary Schmich, “Sometimes you're ahead, sometimes you're behind. The race is long and, in the end, it's only with yourself.”


Tell us about your road to publication.


From the time I was a child, I knew I wanted to be a published author. But it took a long time for me to get there. My undergraduate and graduate degrees are in creative writing with an emphasis on poetry. After many years as a poet, I decided to teach myself how to write fiction, and I completely fell in love with it. I also pursued a career in law, but I managed to find time between classes and in the evenings to work on my various fiction manuscripts. 


In 2019, I began writing the manuscript that would become Aveline, my first published novel. The same year, I moved from the San Francisco Bay Area to Las Vegas, where I joined Sin City Writers Group (SCWG). When I finally finished the manuscript in early 2023, I began bringing it chapter by chapter to our weekly workshops. My fellow SCWG writers were instrumental in helping me develop the storyline and characters. 


One writer, R.H. Bird, told me that his publisher, The Wild Rose Press, was seeking young-adult dystopian novels, and he encouraged me to submit my manuscript. Later in 2023, I was honored to receive a publishing contract for Aveline. The novel was just released on October 9, 2024, and is now available for purchase.


What is your book that you will feature today and how did you come up with the idea to write it?


Aveline is a dystopian adventure novel geared toward a young-adult (12-18) audience, but its themes of loyalty, friendship, and courage in the face of governmental oppression will appeal to readers of all ages. 


The book centers on Aveline Fleur, a young heroine who will stop at nothing to save the ones she loves from a corrupt dictatorship—which happens to be run by her own family. When we meet her at the beginning of the story, Aveline has been relentlessly bullied, and she doesn’t think of herself as strong or brave. However, she begins to develop those qualities as she embarks on a journey that takes her far from home and immerses her in a world of danger. 


The novel began as a short story that I started writing in 2012. The main characters were Allyn Fleur, the government’s propaganda minister, and her daughter Aveline. Allyn’s greatest ambition is to completely control their country, Alterra, and make the people bend to her will. Aveline, on the other hand, is a normal preteen who just wants to have fun with her friends and find her place in the world. She has no idea that her future teeters on a knife’s edge because of her mother’s evil plans. 


The story was fun to write, but it didn’t have a very strong plot. I worked on it periodically over the years while trying to write other manuscripts. Then, in the beginning of 2019 while going through a stressful time at work, I decided that maybe this story could become a full-length novel. I liked its themes, and it had all the right ingredients to become a bigger narrative, so I decided to give it a shot.  


What a great writing story! Let's get a blurb:


For thirteen-year-old Aveline Fleur, a child of Alterra’s ruling house, life is pretty much perfect. She attends private school, owns a horse, and lives on an enormous estate where she and her best friend Bruno run wild. But when she discovers that her family is involved in a sinister plot to brainwash people who speak out against the regime—and that Bruno and his mother are in danger—Aveline must summon the courage to save herself and her friends before it’s too late.


How about an excerpt?

“Um, Elton?” Aveline called. “I think we missed our turn.”


She expected the driver to wink at her in the rearview mirror, as he always did, and tell her that his morning cup of coffee hadn’t kicked in yet.


But he was silent.


“Elton, you’ve got to turn around! I’m going to be late for school! If my mother finds out, she’ll have my head on a platter!”


In response, however, he pressed a button that drew a blackout shade across the glass partition between them.


“Hey! What are you doing?”


But that was not all. The safety locks clicked shut. She tugged at the handle of the door closest to her seat but couldn’t open it. She slid to the other door. Exactly the same.


She scurried to the front of the passenger compartment, where she knelt on the seat and knocked on the partition.


“Elton!”


No answer. As she turned to the window to see where they were, and where they were headed, she found that she could not. All the windows, which were tinted to begin with, quickly turned opaque. How was that even possible from the press of a button? 


Her stomach plummeted like an elevator in freefall. It was now so dark inside the compartment that she couldn’t even see her own hand in front of her face. She felt around the door for the power window controls, but when she found the correct buttons and pressed them, the windows wouldn’t budge. With both fists, she banged again on the partition.


“Elton, can you hear me? Please . . . stop the car! Let me out!”


When he didn’t reply, she began to panic. Like a trapped animal, she pounded on the windows and doors, groped frantically around the compartment for something she could use to break the glass. From her backpack she dug out a heavy textbook and threw it against one of the windows, but it merely bounced off and tumbled to the floor.


Of course the glass won’t break. These windows are bulletproof.


She even tried pulling down the backseat, hoping she could crawl into the trunk and escape from there. But the heavy leather seat wouldn’t budge. Her breathing quickened, and cold sweat dripped from under her arms and down her sides.


This is the punishment Uncle Simon was going to “think on” last night.


Surely Simon had bribed the driver. Or . . . maybe Elton was working for the Stam. Kindly old Elton, who would have punched the bullies in the nose if she’d asked him to. She never would have suspected him of being in the Stam’s pocket. Then again, she wouldn’t have suspected her uncle or her mother of disappearing people either.


Everyone’s loyal until they’re not


Wow! Aveline sounds like an exciting read!  Its buy links can be found below along with S.J.'s contact information.


S.J., what’s your next project or what are you working on now?


Right now, I’m working on my second book, Third Moon. I like to describe it as Brave New World meets Gattaca, with a dash of Bridgerton.


Third Moon is set on the planet Ceres X, where each citizen is assigned a “genetic fitness score” at birth that cannot be changed, thus creating a rigid class system. What happens when Kat, a young woman from the lowest class, falls for Cynfael, a young man from the highest? Can they overcome the obstacles in their path to love, or will societal expectations tear them apart?


Aveline Buy Links:



Social Media Contact Information:


  • Author Website: https://sjcarson.com/

  • Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/216994105-aveline

  • Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/authorsjcarsonofficial/

  • TikTok: https://www.tiktok.com/@sjcarsonauthor

  • Twitter/X: x.com/SJCarsonAuthor


 Thank you, S.J., for being my guest today. Any questions or comments for S.J.?

Tuesday, October 22, 2024

The Magic of The Season

The calendar says October and that means it's time for the witches, ghosts and goblins as well as magic to come out. That's exactly what we're doing today in My Writing Corner. My guest is Zach Stivers who has a book which just came out that sounds like it's perfect for the season. 


Zach and his wife live in central Virginia, at the foot of the Shenandoah National Park. He says they love to hike in the woods with their dogs and then stop off for a drink or two at the local brewery. He has a degree in English Literature from Florida State University, runs slow half-marathons, and says he leads an overly-competitive book club that reads a book a week … or else!  His newest book that we are featuring today is The Witches of Claw and Fang.

Let's get a blurb: 


Welcome to the cozy mountain town of Pineville, Virginia. It’s autumn, the leaves are gold and orange, the apples are crisp and sweet, town residents are going missing, and a bloodthirsty monster with ten-inch claws is loose in the forest. 


Morgan Reaves tries her damndest NOT to use magic. That’s why she hid in Pineville, after all. But now, Morgan needs to dust off her spell-casting skills, ASAP. Problem is, she may have lost her touch. She has another problem, too, and it smells like wet dog. Max: AKA the naked man with rip-cord tight muscles that stumbled out of the woods near Morgan’s house, ranting about curses and conspiracies and a coven of witches. Is he a werewolf? Well, yes. But he’s also the only one who can help her defeat whatever evil is threatening her adopted hometown. That is, if they manage to not kill each other first...


Want to know more? I do! Let's get a book excerpt: 

The car jolted sideways, knocking Morgan's legs out behind her, wrenching the breath out of her lungs. A massive hand gripped her ankle, yanked her upward and tossed her haphazardly into the air. She crashed into the lawn some twenty yards away, her skull bouncing hard off the ground. She blinked. She was in the middle of the lawn.

How was she in the middle of the lawn?

Joey yelped. She looked over as a massive furry brown thing slapped Joey halfway across the yard. Bear, she thought, in a detached, concussed sort-of-way, but it was clearly not a bear.

It was taller and thinner than a bear and it looked more wolf than bear and it looked more demonic than either wolf or bear and it glared at her with ferocious golden eyes. It took a step toward her, and she could see it had a thick scar running up its ribs onto its neck, could see sinewy muscles under brown fur, could see absurdly large white teeth inside a snarling lupine mouth. Could see a torn piece of her mail haphazardly dangling from its sickeningly large, clawed hands.

A scream got stuck in her throat.

Fear flooded her mind. She knew she needed to act, but she felt pressed frozen into the ground.

Joey found his courage before she did, leaping towards the monster. The beast lunged at the dog.

“No!”

She pushed out her hands, fingers dancing, wrists snapping with an instinctual twist. The wind gusted behind her, and she heard a musical sizzling zap and the demon-wolf-thing yelped and leapt back, fleeing for the woods. Morgan ran for the front door, pulling the keys from her sweater pocket.

“Joey, come!”

She fumbled at the deadbolt. She tried the wrong key at first in her panic, flipped and flipped the key chain around, almost dropped the key chain completely, found the right key, jammed it at the door and it bounced off the hole and then it bounced off the hole again and she knew the beast-monster must be emerging from the woods by now, surely it was coming for her, blood-red slobber dripping off its fangs, and she realized she still was using the wrong key and she groaned and then she found it, the correct key, finally—thank god—but her hands trembled and the key wouldn’t slide in the hole, and then the keys slipped out from her sweaty fingers and they dropped onto the deck, and then, as if in slow motion, gravity pulled them through a crack between the wood planks and the blackness under the deck consumed them.

Focus.

She heard rustling in the woods.

Joey began barking again at her side.

It’s coming.

In through the nose, out through the mouth.

She pressed two fingers against the keyhole, extended her other hand out into the air, flicked her fingers, and visualized the lock turning.

Remember.

Remember the old ways.

Remember what your father forbid.

The door unlocked.


Yikes, I'm hooked, but you'll have to buy the book to find out what happens! Here are the 

Buy Links:


Amazon:

The Witches of Claw and Fang eBook : Stivers, Zach : Kindle Store


Barnes & Noble:

https://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/the-witches-of-claw-and-fang-zach-stivers/1146027139?ean=9781509256860


Wild Rose Press:

https://wildrosepress.com/product/the-witches-of-claw-and-fang/



And if you would like to know more about Zach, here is his social media info:


Social Media:

@AuthorZach on TikTok

                              @zachstivers on Insta

                              www.zachstiverspublications.com


Thank you, Zach, for being my guest today. Any questions or comments for Zach?


Tuesday, October 15, 2024

Finishing That Book


Every week I post  blogs focusing on various authors describing their books and their writing process. This week I am going to do something a little different.  I am going to turn the camera around.  For many years writing has been a part of my life—for 30 years as a television journalist and for the past 15 as a fiction writer. I somehow stumbled into writing as teenager and I don’t think I ever want to quit. Fiction writing was my first choice and I wrote my first manuscript when I was in high school. Scribbled on notepaper, it was naturally going nowhere; so once I learned to type, I began transcribing. I have to admit that I still do some writing on tablets and in notebooks. For many years I have kept a small notebook in my purse or in my car and whenever I’ve gone to lunch alone, I take some time to work on whatever story I’m writing. In recent years I’ve also taken to carrying around my work on my I-pad so it’s handy in case I have some free time to edit.

The editing process has always been tough for me, and I’ve discovered it’s that way for many other writers. We all love to put things down on the printed page, but that editing… sigh… just takes time. One thing I know, though: the editing process can make all the difference in the world on whether a book sells or simply sits inside your computer as the query letters pile up. As a television newswriter with often an hourly deadline to meet, I learned that no matter what, it paid to take the time to edit. In recent years, having given classes on editing, I know this whole process should be simple, but every book is different and every book needs editing in a different way. With all that in mind, here are some ideas and tips for editing your own book:

Edit carefully. To me, the editing process must go through at least three passes. First, I look for obvious mistakes, misspellings, name mistakes where one character is Harry at the beginning and Jeff by the ending. Perhaps the name of the closest town undergoes a name change. 

Edit more than once. In the next pass, I look at the basics and mechanics of writing. Yes, some of that can be done with a simple editing program, but I suggest being more careful and doing the job on your own. That means learning and knowing the basic rules of grammar, which is always good for any writer. Learn the rules and make a steady practice of using them and knowing your weak points. That not only helps with your current book but any book  you might write in the future.

The next pass is for polishing. Could something be phrased better? Does the writing sing? Where are the passages where I struggled? Did I finally succeed in getting the words just right?  If there were things you wanted fixed, do it now.

Read your book out loud. The  final pass in editing is one of the most important. I usually suggest that writers complete the process by re-reading your manuscript out loud and listening to the words.  Why? Very simple. If you stumble over reading a word or a sentence, you will notice. Does the sentence need to be rewritten? Is it so long you lose your place halfway through? Did you stumble over a misspelled word or grammatical error? Does the sentence make sense or confuse you even while you read it?

Reading out loud can help you pick out words that might be misspelled, awkward phrasing or missing words. It is also useful for dealing with dialogue and whether it makes sense or sounds stilted. Yes, it might seem odd to have to do this, but believe me, I have always found it valuable.  Reading back a story out loud is the ONE thing I suggest to writers when they do any writing—whether it is a book, or even something as simple as this blog. For years when I was working as a television newswriter I almost always re-read my copy out loud before it went to the anchor or reporter. It was one of the early suggestions I received from a wise old news guy, and I never forgot the lesson. I did that in a busy newsroom with other people around and as a result I got used to reading EVERYTHING I write out loud.  (Yes, I even read this blog out loud– with only the cats listening—and that reading helped me catch a couple of missing words!) In the newsroom most of us did it because we knew our words were going to be read by a reporter or anchorman and the sentence couldn’t afford to be confusing. We couldn’t afford to make simple mistakes that might trip up a person who could be reading the copy for the first time live on the air with thousands of viewers watching. It had to make sense coming out of the anchor or reporter’s mouth. That’s what you want for your readers.

This is even more true for writing dialogue.  The words should sound as though they were spoken by the hero and the heroine. No one speaks alike so by reading your story out loud, you can hear the words your hero and heroine are speaking and whether they sound different.

Soon I will finish my latest book. Doesn’t that sound great? After months of research, months of planning and many more months of writing, it is finally about to go out the door.

While it is great to finally be able to think about sending it off in an email to my editor, it is still sad, scary and with a note of trepidation that I will hit the send key on my computer and know that it is gone. Will it be good enough for the editor to immediately send me the final okay? Will she want more work or changes? 

Heavy sigh… Who knows?

One thing I know—I will be happy to be finished with the editing process. And that’s why I am discussing it today. A good job of editing can make all the difference in the world on whether a book sells or sits inside your computer. Having given classes on editing, this whole process should be simple to me, but every book is different and every book needs editing in a different way.  

As stated earlier, the editing process has helped me as I finish my next book—number three in what I call the Dead Man Trilogy—a series set on a ranch in New Mexico.  

Here are the blurbs for my first two book in the series:


A woman on a mission, a man with secrets to hide...

When tabloid reporter Cere Medina decides to dig into the mysterious cold case death of Marco Gonzales, she hopes it will save her career. Instead, she unearths enough secrets to make a small town explode. Not to mention putting her on the wrong side of the town's fascinating sheriff.

Sheriff Rafe Tafoya doesn't need anyone digging up the past. He's come back to his hometown of Rio Rojo, New Mexico seeking peace and quiet. But Cere's arrival puts his town--and his heart--in danger.

Behind it all lurks the ghostly presence of Marco, who has everyone playing by a dead man's rules...






Free spirit Freeda Ferguson goes searching for her father and finds intrigue instead. Attorney Patrick Sanchez wants only to close a door in his family's past and has no time for Freeda or adventure. When a dead man's shadow and secrets from the past bring death to their present, Patrick and Freeda find themselves drawn into a dangerous search for truth. As a small town seeks treasure, they must seek answers.

Both are available for sale at my buy links below and will soon be followed by Dead Man’s Secrets.

Good luck with your editing!

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Bio:  Rebecca Grace is an Emmy award-winning former  broadcast journalist who currently writes fiction. She has focused on the writing process nearly every day of her adult life. During the work week, she worked in the news department of television stations from Denver to San Diego to Seattle, though she spent most of her working career at network affiliates in Los Angeles--KABC, KCBS, and KNBC. On weekends, she devoted her time to writing novels as well as books on writing. She has presented writing workshops at national conventions and  taught a wide variety of online writing classes with her frequent co-author, Sue Viders. In recent years she has focused on writing fiction full time.  

Any comments or questions? I always love to hear from readers.


A Happy Ending – Hopefully!

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